-=[ Correction/Modification to FM Translation of AlQuraan ]=-
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Salam,
I understood the verse from the second translation
7147 And those who deny Our revelations and the meeting of the Hereafter, their works have collapsed. Are they not being recompensed except for what they used to do?I meant exclamation mark, because the first sentence is when a brother tells the others to tell their father. The verses end with what they are to tell their father, so it's a continuity of "Return to your father and tell him..."" so it would look like this;
1281 "Return to your father, and tell him "Our father, your son has stolen, and we did not witness except what we learned, and we could not know the unseen!"
1282 "And ask the people of the town which we were in, and the caravan which we have returned with. We are being truthful!""Salam
Salam,
This verse will make it clearer what I meant regarding exclamation in the end;
1926
?So eat and drink and be content. If you see any mortal, then say ?I have vowed an abstinence for the Almighty, so I will not talk today to any of mankind.??Salam
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Salam,
Here are a few errors, and some that I'm unsure about.
- Add s to belong, in bold
142 God, to whom belong all that is in the heavens and the earth. And
woe to the rejecters from a severe retribution.2.Missing dot in the end
1411 Their messengers said ?We are indeed mortals like you, but
God will bestow His grace upon whom He pleases from His
servants. And it is not up to us to bring you proof except with the
permission of God. And in God the believers should place their
trust?3.Change is to it, in bold
1634 Thus is was, that the evil of their work has afflicted them, and
they will be surrounded by that which they used to mock.4.Im unsure about this. Is the world correct, or should it be this world?
1641 And those who have emigrated for God, after they were oppressed,
We will grant them good in the world, and the reward of the
Hereafter will be greater, if only they knew.5.Remove extra "will", in bold
178 Perhaps your Lord will have mercy on you, and if you revert then
will We will also revert. And We made Hell a gathering place for
the rejecters.6.Missing dot in the end
1790 And they said ?We will not believe unto you until you cause a
spring of water to burst out of the ground?- Unsure about following 1816. Is it part of what the youths said?
1814 And We made firm their hearts when they stood and said ?Our
Lord, the Lord of the heavens and the earth, we will not call
besides Him any god. If we have done so then it was in error.?1815 ?Here are our people, they have taken gods besides Him, while
they do not come with any clear authority. Who then is more
wicked than he who invents lies about God??1816 ?So when you withdraw from them and what they serve besides
God, seek refuge in the cave, and your Lord will spread His mercy
upon you and prepare for your problem a solution.?Salam
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Salam,
- Add an s to "work", in bold,
1830 Those who believe and do good works, We do not waste the
reward of those who have done good work.- Add a comma between words in bold
196 ?To inherit from me, and inherit from the descendants of Jacob.
And make him my Lord, well pleasing.?3.Make have small
2035 ?You Have been seer over us.?
4.Make have small, different verse
2041 ?And I Have raised you for Myself.?
5.Check verse
2115 So that remained their cry until We took them all, and they
became still.6.Is you or they correct, in bold?
2131 And We made on the earth stabilizers so that it would not tumble
with you, and We made in it wide paths that they may be guided.- criterion is small in 2185, 829. The rest of verses containing criterion are capital.
2185 The month of Ramadhan, in which the Qur?an was sent down, as
a guide to the people and as clarifications of the guidance and the
criterion. Those of you who witness the month shall fast therein;
and whoever is ill or traveling, then the same number from
different days. God wants to bring you ease and not to bring you
hardship; and so that you may complete the count, and magnify
God for what He has guided you, that you may be thankful.829 O you who believe, if you are aware of God, He will make a
criterion for you, and He will cancel your sins and forgive you.
God is possessor of great grace.8.Make "you" capital
2183 And Job when he called his Lord ?I have been afflicted with
harm, and you are the Most Merciful of those who show mercy!?9.Missing dot at the end
2196 Until Gog and Magog is opened, and from every angle they will
come forth10.Add an s to "soul", in bold
21102 They shall not hear the slightest sound from it, and they will be
in what their soul desires abiding therein.- Change to "this world"
229 Bending his side to misguide from the path of God. He will have
humiliation in the world and We will make him taste on the Day
of Resurrection the retribution of burning.12.Make "His" small
2230 Thus, and whoever honors the restrictions of God, then it is
better for him with His Lord. And the livestock has been made
permissible for you; except what is being recited to you; so avoid
the foulness of idols and avoid saying false statements.13.Remove "to"
2347 So they said ?Shall we believe to two mortals like us, while their
people are servants to us??14.Remove "to", check both verses,
2386 Say ?Who is the Lord of the seven heavens and the Lord of the
great Throne??
2387 They will say ?To God.? Say ?Will you then not take heed??15.Remove "to", check both verses,
2388 Say ?In whose hand is the sovereignty of all things, and He
protects while there is no protector against Him, if you know??
2389 They will say ?To God.? Say ?Then why are you deceived??16.Make "knower" capital
2392 The knower of the unseen and the seen. Be He exalted above
what they set up.17.Change to "this world"
2419 As for those who enjoy that immorality spreads among those who
have believed, they will have a painful retribution in the world
and the Hereafter. And God knows while you do not know.18.Make "Bounty" small
2433 And let those who are not able to marry continue to be chaste
until God enriches them of His Bounty. And if those who are
committed to by your oath seek to consummate the marriage, then
document it with them if you find that they are ready, and give
them from the wealth of God which He has bestowed upon you.
And do not force your young women to be unchaste if they have
desired to be emancipated, in order that you may make a gain in
the goods of this worldly life. And if anyone has compelled them,
then for their compulsion, God is Forgiving, Merciful.- Make "expert" capital
2558 And put your trust in the Living Who does not die, and glorify
His praise. It is enough for Him that He is expert in the sins of His
servants.20.Missing dots in both verses, in the end
2616 ?So both of you go to Pharaoh and say ?We are messengers of the
Lord of the worlds?2617 ?So send with us the Children of Israel??
21.Missing dot in the end
26135 ?I fear for you the retribution of a great day?
22.I'm unsure about this one. Maybe add a comma between the bold
279 ?O Moses, it is I God, the Noble, the Wise.?
23.Missing dots in both verses, in the end
2730 ?It is from Solomon, and it reads ?In the name of God, the
Almighty, the Merciful??
2731 ??Do not be arrogant towards me and come to me as submitters??- Check the verse, might be a typo
2742 So when she came, it was said ?Is your throne like this?? She
said ?It appears to be similar.? ?And we were given knowledge
before her, and we had submitted.?25.Missing dot in the end
2749 They said ?Swear by God to one another that we will attack him
and his family at night, and we will then say to his supporters
?We did not witness who murdered his family, and we are being
truthful??26.Should "god" be capital or the way it is?
2838 And Pharaoh said ?O commanders, I have not known of any god
for you other than me. Therefore, O Haamaan, fire-up the bricks
and make for me a high platform, so perhaps I may take a look at
the god of Moses; though I think he is one of the liars.?27.Capital "able"?
3037 Did they not see that God grants the provisions for whom He
wills, and He is able? In that are signs for a people who believe.28.Make "Lord" small?
324 God is the One who has created the heavens and the earth, and
what is between them in six days, then He settled upon the
Throne. You do not have besides Him any Lord, nor intercessor.
Will you not then remember?29.Missing dot in the end
3366 On the Day when their faces will be turned over in the Fire, they
will say ?Oh, we wish we had obeyed God, and obeyed the messenger?30.Which day, is it the Last Day or day of retribution?
3430 Say ?You have an appointed day, which you cannot delay by one
hour, nor advance.?31.Is "Best" correct? Check some other verses, they have small "best", such as "best Creator" or "best to respond"
3439 Say ?My Lord gives provisions for whom He wishes of His servants
and He restricts. And anything you spend, He will replace
it; and He is the Best of providers.? -
- Capital witness?
3447 Say ?I have not asked you for any wage; for it will be your own.
My wage is from God, and He is witness over all things.?33.Make "maker" capital
351 Praise be to God, Initiator of the heavens and the earth; maker of
the angels as messengers with wings of two, and three, and four.
He increases in the creation as He wishes. God is able to do all
things.34.Words or works? in bold
3510 Whoever is seeking dignity, then know that to God belongs all
dignity. To Him ascend the good words, and the good deeds raise
them up. And as for those who scheme evil, they will have a
painful retribution, and their scheming will fail.35.The bold is not part of what is to be said
3540 Say ?Do you see the partners whom you have called on besides
God? Show me what they have created on the earth. Or do they
possess any partnership in the heavens? Or have We given them
a book wherein they are taking knowledge from it? Indeed, what
the transgressors promise one another is no more than arrogance.?36.Add an "a" between words in bold
3619 They said ?Keep your welcome with you, for you have been
reminded. Indeed, you are transgressing people.?37.Add an "of" between bold
3740 Except for the servants God who are faithful.
- Change position of words in bold
3792 ?What is the matter, you do not speak??
- Make "sycamore" capital
3813 And Thamud, and the people of Lot, and the people of the
sycamore; these are the Confederates.- Remove the extra exclamation mark
3823 ?This is my brother and he owns ninety-nine lambs, while I own
one lamb; so he said to me ??Let me take care of it? and he pressured
me.?- Add an s to "heaven" (I think)
3827 And We did not create the heaven and the earth, and everything
between them, in vain. Such is the thinking of those who rejected.
Therefore, woe to those who have rejected from the Fire.- Why isn't "darkness's" written darknesses? This was same in the 2013 physical version
396 He created you from one person, then He made from it its mate.
And He sent down to you eight pairs of the livestock. He creates
you in the wombs of your mothers, a creation after a creation in
three darkness?s. Such is God your Lord. To Him belongs the
sovereignty. There is no god besides Him. How is it then you
deviate?- I think it is missing "the retribution" between bold words
3924 As he who saves his face from the terrible retribution on the Day
of Resurrection. And it will be said to the transgressors ?Taste
for what you have earned.?44.Missing of between bold
3963 To Him belongs the keys of the heavens and the earth. And those
who rejected the revelations God, they are the losers.45.Missing dot in the end
3975 And you will see the angels surrounding the Throne, glorifying
the praise of their Lord. And it will be judged between them
with the truth, and it will be said ?Praise be to God, Lord of the
worlds?46.Missing dot in the end
4027 And Moses said ?I seek refuge with my Lord and your Lord from
every arrogant one who does not believe in the Day of Reckoning?- Last sentence part of what God said
4060 And your Lord said ?Call on Me and I will respond to you.?
Surely, those who are too arrogant to serve Me, they will enter
Hell, humbled.- Are these correct in structure?
4073 Then it will be said to them ?Where are those that you have set
up as partners?
4074 ?Beside God?? They will say ?They have abandoned us. No, we
did not used to call on anything before!? Thus God leads the rejecters astray.49.I think the last two sentences need exclamation mark
4210 And anything you dispute in, then its judgment shall be with
God. Such is God my Lord. In Him I place my trust, and to Him
I repent.50.Add s to "belong"
4212 To Him belong the possessions of the heavens and the earth. He
spreads out the provision for whoever He wills, and He measures
it. He is fully aware of all things.51.Missing dot in the end
469 Say ?I am no different from the other messengers, nor do I know
what will happen to me or to you. I only follow what is inspired
to me. I am no more than a clear warner?52.Exchange comma with this ""
4634 And the Day those who rejected are displayed to the Fire ?Is this
not the truth?? They will say ?Yes indeed, by our Lord.? He will
say, ?Then taste the retribution for what you had rejected.?53.Add an s to "belong"
484 He is the One who sends down tranquility into the hearts of the
believers, so that they may increase in faith along with their
present faith. And to God belong the soldiers of the heavens and
the earth, and God is Knowledgeable, Wise.54.Add s to "belong"
487 And to God belong the soldiers of the heavens and the earth. And
God is Noble, Wise.55.Is "Aware" correct?
4811
The Nomads who lagged behind will say to you ?We were pre
occupied with our money and our family, so ask forgiveness for
us.? They say with their tongues what is not in their hearts. Say
?Who then would possess any power for you against God if He
wanted harm to afflict you or if He wanted benefit for you?? No,
God is fully Aware of everything you do.56.Add d to "An"
5119 An in their money was a portion for the beggar and the needy.
57.Add an s to the first "belong"
5239 Or to Him belong the daughters, and to you belong the sons?
- I know it is written "Our", but it's God, so I think it should be changed to "sight", unless it's plural in Quran
5248
You shall be patient for the judgment of your Lord, for you are in
Our sights; and glorify the praise of your Lord when you rise.59.Is heaven singular or plural here?
5721 You shall race towards forgiveness from your Lord, and a Paradise
whose width is as the width of the heaven and the earth, prepared
for those who believed in God and His messengers. Such is the
grace of God that He bestows upon whoever He wills. God is the
Possessor of Infinite Grace.60.Capital "Aware"?
5813 Are you reluctant to offer a charity before such meeting? If you
cannot do such, and God has forgiven you; then you shall carry
out the Communion, and contribute towards purification, and
obey God and His messenger. God is fully Aware of everything
you do. -
- Add an s to "belong"
5924 He is God; the Creator, the Initiator, the Designer. To Him belong
the most beautiful names. Glorifying Him is everything in the
heavens and the earth. He is the Noble, the Wise.62.Missing dot in the end
616 And when Jesus, son of Mary, said ?O children of Israel, I am a
messenger of God to you, affirming what is between my hands of
the Torah and bringing good news of a messenger to come after
me whose name will be ?most acclaimed.?? But when he showed
them the clear proofs, they said ?This is clearly magic?63.Add an s to "belong"
637 They are the ones who say ?Do not spend on those who are
with the messenger of God, unless they abandon him!? And to
God belong the treasures of the heavens and the earth, but the
hypocrites do not understand.64.I think it should be whoever instead of "who", also I'm unsure about "rejected". It should be "whoever rejects", if Quran allows
9019 And who rejected Our revelations, they are the people of misery.
- Make "His" small
9220 Except the face of His Lord, the Most High.
- Why is "god" small in 1143? The previous verses has "Lord" and "King" capital
1141 Say ?I seek refuge with the Lord of the people,?
1142 ?The King of the people,?
1143 ?The god of the people,?- This last one is regarding "who" that comes after any of the names of God.
Sometimes they are small, sometimes capital; examples
He is the One Who
He is the One whoWhich is the correct?
Here are some verses, there are many more that I haven't added;
2554 And He is the One who has created from the water a mortal, so
He made him multiply and mate. And your Lord is Capable.2559 The One who has created the heavens and the earth and what is
between them in six days, then He settled upon the Throne. The
Almighty; so ask Him for He is Expert.2561 Blessed is the One Who made towers in the heaven and He made
in it a lamp and an illuminating moon.2562 And He is the One Who made the night and the day in succession,
for those who wish to remember or wish to be thankful.2882 And those who wished they were in his place the day before
said ?Indeed it is God Who provides or restricts for whoever He
chooses from among His servants. Had it not been for the grace
of God towards us, He could have caused the earth to swallow us
as well. We now realize that the rejecters never succeed.?3048 God Who sends the winds, so they raise clouds, and He spreads
them in the sky as He wishes, then He turns them into joined
pieces, then you see the rain drops come forth from their midst.
Then when He makes them fall on whoever He wills of His
servants, they rejoice!4061 God, it is He Who has made for you the night to reside in and
the day to see in. Surely, God provides many blessings upon the
people, but most of the people are not thankful.4312 And He is the One who has created all the pairs, and He made for
you of the ships and the livestock that which you can ride.
you of the ships and the livestock that which you can ride.Salam
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Salam,
Is "We" correct, in bold
6152 ?And do not come near the money of the orphan, except for what
is best, until he reaches his independence; and give honestly full
measure and weight equitably. We do not burden a soul except
with what it can bear, and if you speak then be just even if against
a relative; and regarding the pledges made to God, you shall
observe them. This He has enjoined you that you may remember.?Salam
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Salam,
a small typo in bold, remove "s"
729 Say ?My Lord orders justice, and that you set yours faces at every
temple, and that you call on Him, while being faithful to Him in
the system; as He initiated you, so you will return.?Salam
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Salam,
a typo in the end with exclamation mark and missing dot
736 As for those who reject Our revelations, and become arrogant
towards them; then these are the dwellers of the Fire, in it they
will abide?Salam
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Salam,
"you" needs capital letter, in bold
7151 He said ?My Lord, forgive me and my brother, and admit us in
Your mercy; and you are the Most Merciful of those who show
mercy.?missing o in bold
7156 ?And decree for us good in this world, and in the Hereafter;
we have been guided towards You.? He said ?My punishment,
I afflict with it whom I chose, and My mercy encompasses all
things. I will thus decree it for those who are aware and contribute
towards purification, and those who believe in Our revelations.?I think this verse needs the removal of exclamation marks
7157 ?Those who follow the messenger, the gentile prophet, whom
they find written for them in the Torah and the Gospel; he orders
them to kindness, and prohibits them from vice, and he makes
permissible for them the good things, and he makes forbidden
for them the nasty things, and he removes their burden and the
shackles that are upon them. So those who believe in him, and
support him, and help him persevere, and follow the light that
was sent down with him; these are the successful ones.?Salam
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Salam,
Look into this verse. It says "say to the rejecters", but after they are addressed as they and them instead of you. If it's correct, then maybe it needs removal of exclamation mark?
838 Say to the rejecters ?If they cease, then what has passed before
will be forgiven to them, and if they return to it, then the example
of the previous generations has already been given.?Salam
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Salam,
make His small in bold
1020 And they say ?If only a sign was sent down to him from His
Lord.? Say ?The future is with God, so wait, and I will wait with
you.?Salam
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Salam peace
Again I did not know where exactly to post this but I have a question regarding the FM translation
In chapter 71 we read
7124
And they have misguided many, but We only increase the wicked in misguidanceBut is translated as second person in
7128 "My Lord, forgive me, and my parents, and whoever enters my home as a believer, and the believing males, and the believing females; and do not increase the wicked except in destruction."
Excuse my ignorance but? may I ask why?
Thanks peace
Virginia
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Salam peace
Again I did not know where exactly to post this but I have a question regarding the FM translation
In chapter 71 we read
7124
And they have misguided many, but We only increase the wicked in misguidanceBut is translated as second person in
7128 "My Lord, forgive me, and my parents, and whoever enters my home as a believer, and the believing males, and the believing females; and do not increase the wicked except in destruction."
Excuse my ignorance but? may I ask why?
Thanks peace
Virginia
7124 is for sure mistranslated technically, it should be in the same form as how 7128 is translated, thus like "...NOT increase...EXCEPT...".
Second person should be ok I think. -
Salam,
floowing verses, check the exclamation marks. Maybe they need removal in 1091-92, though it's clear it's God saying after verse 1090
1090 And We helped the Children of Israel cross the sea, and Pharaoh
and his soldiers followed them out of hatred and animosity. But
when he was certain to drown, he said ?I believe that there is no
god except the One in whom the Children of Israel believe, and I
am of those who have submitted.?
1091 ?Now you say this? While before you disobeyed and were of the
corrupters!?
1092 ?This day, We will preserve your body, so that you become a sign
for those after you.? But most of the people are unaware of Our
signs!Salam
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2239
Instead of so while walking or riding should be one by one or by two connected.
Instead of If you become secure should be So, when you confirm (by action).
Previous ayet is wrongly translated also.
Selam to ones who think about His ayets with no shirk.
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2239
Instead of so while walking or riding should be one by one or by two connected.
Instead of If you become secure should be So, when you confirm (by action).
Previous ayet is wrongly translated also.
Selam to ones who think about His ayets with no shirk.
Amen means to be confident or secure. It does not vary much from that connotation.
Be well
Amenuel -
Wait, did I get it right? Are you purposely chaging the words in Arabic to fit the correct translation?
You are changing the Quran. giveup
Me? Which words?
MoF, it's not fear as you (and author of this translation) probably think it is. Check 4101, maybe you'll see...
