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Salam,
My apologies for the absence.
I have uploaded the file with the fixes http//free-minds.org/sites/default/files/quran.pdf
With regards to the comment of Aladin
Qasitoon is NOT the same as Muqsiteen (it is the opposite).
Muqsit is someone who gives equitably, Qasit is someone who takes for himself (one is good, the other is bad).
You can see this in 7215 where God tells us that "the Qasitoon" will be the firewood of Hell.
To maintain consistency, I have used "inequitable" for Qasitoon to make it clear as the opposite of Muqsitoon.
Regards,
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Salam,
My apologies for the absence.
I have uploaded the file with the fixes http//free-minds.org/sites/default/files/quran.pdf
With regards to the comment of Aladin
Qasitoon is NOT the same as Muqsiteen (it is the opposite).
Muqsit is someone who gives equitably, Qasit is someone who takes for himself (one is good, the other is bad).
You can see this in 7215 where God tells us that "the Qasitoon" will be the firewood of Hell.
To maintain consistency, I have used "inequitable" for Qasitoon to make it clear as the opposite of Muqsitoon.
Regards,
Salam,
Can you check following verse, it might be missing "earth" or "world", between bold
1199 And they were followed by a curse in this, and on the Day of
Resurrection. What a miserable path to follow!Salam
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Salam,
Can you check following verse, it might be missing "earth" or "world", between bold
1199 And they were followed by a curse in this, and on the Day of
Resurrection. What a miserable path to follow!Nothing missing. I can amend to "in this one" if it makes the verse clearer?
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Salam,
Nothing missing. I can amend to "in this one" if it makes the verse clearer?
salam,
That would make it clearer.
Salam
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Salam,
I read this verse and want to see if it can be written another way, although it's understandable this way.
378 And from among them is a group who twist their tongues with
the Book so that you may think it is from the Book, while it is not
from the Book, and they say it is from God while it is not from
God, and they say about God lies while they know.To
378 And from among them is a group who twist the Book with their tongues so that you may think it is from the Book, while it is not
from the Book, and they say it is from God while it is not from
God, and they say about God lies while they know.Is it possible?
Salam
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Salam,
I don't think it can be amended as the sequence in Arabic speaks of the tongues being twisted with the book.
Perhaps "And from among them is a group who twist their tongues using the Book so that you may..."?
Yes, that's a better translation
Salam
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Salam,
Can you check the following verses, specifically in bold, if there are any errors with "Our" and "my"
1440 ?My Lord, let me hold the Communion, and also from my
progeny. Our Lord, and accept my prayer.?1441 ?Our Lord, forgive me and my parents, and the believers on the
Day the reckoning is called.?Salam
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Salam,
Missing "as" in verse, between bold?
1617 Is He who creates the same he who does not create? Will you not
remember?Salam
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Salam,
Can you check the following verses, specifically in bold, if there are any errors with "Our" and "my"
1440 ?My Lord, let me hold the Communion, and also from my
progeny. Our Lord, and accept my prayer.?1441 ?Our Lord, forgive me and my parents, and the believers on the
Day the reckoning is called.?They are written in Arabic as this.
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Salam,
This verse might miss an "a", between bold
5914 They will not fight you all together unless they are in fortified
towns, or from behind walls. Their might appears formidable
among themselves. You would think that they are united, but
their hearts are divided. This is because they are people who do
not comprehend.Salam
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Salam,
this verse needs apostrophes ', in bold
5117
?I only said to them what You commanded me to say, that you
shall serve God my Lord and your Lord; and I was witness over
them as long as I was with them, but when You terminated my
life, You were watcher over them. You are witness over all things.?Salam
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Salam,
in this verse it says "say", then "We" is added. There might be an error in this verse
1795
Say ?If the earth had angels walking about in security, We would
have sent down to them from the heaven an angel as a messenger.?Salam
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Salam,
a typo, the "S" make smaller
2847
Thus, if any disaster strikes them as a consequence of their own
deeds they cannot Say ?Our Lord, if only You sent a messenger
to us, so that we would follow Your revelations, and we would be
of the believers.?Salam
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Salam,
this translation of the verse has an error, it says "say" then it's written "My".
3953
Say ?O My servants who transgressed against themselves, do not
despair of the mercy of God. For God forgives all sins. He is the
Forgiver, the Merciful.?Salam
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Salam,
this translation of the verse has an error, it says "say" then it's written "My".
3953
Say ?O My servants who transgressed against themselves, do not
despair of the mercy of God. For God forgives all sins. He is the
Forgiver, the Merciful.?Salam
That's how it's written in arabic too, the translation is correct.
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Salam,
this verse need capital "My", in bold
3191
Those who remember God while standing, and sitting, and on
their sides, and they ponder over the creation of the heavens and
the earth ?Our Lord you have not created this without purpose,
glory to You, spare us the retribution of the Fire!?Salam
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Salam,
in this verse, can you check if the arrangement of the second sentence is correct?
42 And give the orphans their money. And do not replace the nasty
with the good, and do not consume their money with your money;
for truly this is a great sin!I think it should be "do not replace the good with the nasty".
Salam
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Salam,
in this verse, is it possible to remove dot and add question mark in the end?
421
And how can you take it when you have become intimate with
each other, and they have taken from you a solemn covenant.Salam
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Salam,
File has been corrected and uploaded.
Some comments
this verse need capital "My", in bold
3191
Those who remember God while standing, and sitting, and on
their sides, and they ponder over the creation of the heavens and
the earth ?Our Lord you have not created this without purpose,
glory to You, spare us the retribution of the Fire!?There is no "My"?
in this verse, can you check if the arrangement of the second sentence is correct?
42 And give the orphans their money. And do not replace the nasty
with the good, and do not consume their money with your money;
for truly this is a great sin!I think it should be "do not replace the good with the nasty".
I kept the sequence (the Arabic was this way), but replaced "with" by "for".
Also, for the "We" and "My"...they are all written correctly this way.
Regards,
