Quran inheritance mistake
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Salaam Nun
Thank you very much for your patience and the high manners with you went through this with me. I really appreciate this.
The fact of the matter is that these are not my ideas, although I agree with them so much that I was afraid they would be "too good to be true". I tried with many people to see if they were error proof, but they were not as patient or knowledgeable as you.These are from Dr Sha7rour's book (Towards new fundamentals on Islamic Jurisprudence concerning women ة, where he discusses inheritance in over 100 pages.
Dr. Sha7rour believes that in this verse (11) we have the basic formula for inheritance distribution amongst the children
2 f and 1 male
1 female and 1 male
3+ females and XmalesThey are the unit formula, to which we can apply different multiples or variables
a) 2x X females and X males
b) X females and X males
c) 3 x X females and YX males, where the multiples are neither a nor b.Back to your question
I) 2f and 2 or 2+ mFirst case 2 f and 2m is calculated as 1f.and 1 m (half for the females and half for the males) boys and girls get equal shares.
Second case 2 females and more than two males case a) females get half and males get the other half boys and girls will not necesarily get equal shares.II) 3 daughters and 2 sons case c), because it is not a multiple of case a) nor b).
This is a summary of the basic equation.
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Salaam Samia,
Thank you very much for your patience and the high manners with you went through this with me. I really appreciate this.
The fact of the matter is that these are not my ideas, although I agree with them so much that I was afraid they would be "too good to be true". I tried with many people to see if they were error proof, but they were not as patient or knowledgeable as you.Thank you ? my pleasure. Good we continued the discussion; it?s a new and interesting perspective.
2 females and 1 male (to the male equal (the) fortune (share of) the two females)
2f = m 12 ratio case # of females is twice # of malesPlease distribute $100 for case 2 females and 1 male
Want to be sure this is correct understanding of (to the male equal (the) fortune (share of) the two females)?
? f + ? f + ? m = 1
$25 + $25 + $50 = $1001 female and 1 male (and if she was one, so for her the half)
f = m 11 ratio case # of females equals # of males3+ females and Xmales (so if they are/were women more/over two, so for them (F) two thirds)
1 ? 2/3 females = 1/3 males ratio 21I?ll have a look over the weekend.
Second case 2 females and more than two males case a) females get half and males get the other half
For clarification, please check to see if ? above is correct; or is it 2/3?
Perhaps help me fill-in template below with total ratio femalesmales for distribution; I already did?
1 female and 1 male
f = m 11 ratio case females equals maleshttp//i25.tinypic.com/64l7xs.jpg
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1m 2m 3m
1f 11 11 11
2f 12 11 12
3f 21 21 11
(If I correctly understood his theory)
The number of females is the variable on which the equation is based, and the number of males revolves around it.
Maybe you better read Dr. Sha7rour's theory critically and comment on it. Here's a shortcut of Chapter Three from his book
http//www.shahrour.org/B4-9.htm?zoom_highlight=%DD%DE%E5+%C7%E1%E3%D1%C3%C9
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1m 2m 3m
1f 11 11 11
2f 12 11 12
3f 21 21 11
(If I correctly understood his theory)
The number of females is the variable on which the equation is based, and the number of males revolves around it.
Salaam Samia,
Thanks for clarifying the ratios and believe I understand how this works?
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Case 3 daughters; 2 sons; wife
1 ? 1/8 wife = 7/8 (daughters and sons)Basically look up distribution ratio for 3f; 2m and distribute remainder at 21 ratio female male
Case 3 daughters, father, mother, wife
1 ? 1/3 parents ? 1/8 wife = 3 daughters; who share equally in the remainder.Without sons, distribution ratio is 10 thus 3 daughters get the whole remaining pie.
I?ll test a few more cases and re-apply similar to siblings as well.
Amazing if that's all it was; something staring at you and yet can?t see it; darn preconceptions.
Peace
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Salaam Samia,
I believe there might be a slight discrepancy with ratios for brothers and sisters which should be same as with daughters and sons...
...fa-in kunna nisaan fawqa ithnatayni falahunna thulutha ma taraka
411 ...so if they are women over two, so for them (F) two thirds what he left,waladun fa-in kanata ithnatayni ani mimma taraka
4176 ...and if they (B) were two (F), so to them (B/F) the two thirds from what he leftOver/encompassing can also mean like saying a kid is over 2 years old yet not 3; more/greater than use a different word...
fa-in kanoo akthara min thalika fahum shurakao fee alththuluthi
412 so if they were more than that, so they are partners in the thirdBelow is my new understanding which "kalalatan" 412 and ?alkalalati? 4176 are same (i.e. childless/spouseless) as stated in Qur'an and they can have a father, mother, and/or siblings. If ?over two? is taken to mean 3+ then it?s a slightly different ratio for kids (use prior diagram) compared to below.
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Greetings all ?
Here is the write up on inheritance verses for future reference.
I?ve also attach a pdf with above diagrams in case the links posted earlier disappear.
waladun fa-in kanata ithnatayni ani mimma taraka
4176 ...and if they (B) were two (F), so to them (B/F) the two thirds from what he left...fa-in kunna nisaan fawqa ithnatayni falahunna thulutha ma taraka
411 ...so if they are women over two, so for them (F) two thirds what he left,The above in my opinion should read ?...so if they are women over/encompassing two similar as in...?
Wahuwa alqahiru fawqa AAibadihi wahuwa alhakeemu alkhabeeru
618 And He is the defeater/conqueror over His worshippers/slaves, and He is the wise/judicious, the expert.Over/encompassing like saying child is over 2 years old (encompassing 2); more/most/greater than word use...
fa-in kanoo akthara min thalika fahum shurakao fee alththuluthi
412 so if they were more than that, so they are partners in the third
Quran 411 ??to the male?? relationship to number of females implied in context to all three cases.
CHILDREN
?God directs/commands/recommends you in your children, to the male equal (the) fortune (share of) the two females,?Ratio of distribution = 12 female/male which is the general case except when...
??so if they are/were women over (encompassing) two, so for them (F) two thirds??
IF number of women is two (still in relation to the male) thus...
IF 2f or similar multiple 2f = m then ratio of distribution = 21
2f; 1 ? nth m
4f; 2m
8f; 4m??and if she was one, so for her the half??
Again this is still in relation to the male...
IF 1f or similar mix f = m then ratio of distribution = 11
1f; 1 ? nth m
2f; 2m
3f; 3mPARENTS
...and to his parents, to each one from them (B) the 1/6 from what he left, if for him was a child, so if (there) was not for him a child), and his parents inherited him, so to his mother the 1/3,Case mother; father
1 ? 1/3 mother = 2/3 fatherThe above is obvious logic; IF only parents, mother gets 1/3 leaving 2/3 for father else IF one parent they get the whole.
...so if brothers were for him, so to his mother the 1/6,
(see 412 and 4176 for distributions ratios)...from after a bequest/will he bequeaths with it or a debt; your (P) fathers and your (P) sons, you (P) do not know, which of them (is) closer to you (P) (in) benefit/usefulness, a religious duty/command from God, that God was/is knowledgeable, wise/judicious.
Quran 412
HUSBAND
And for you (P) 1/2 what your (P) spouses/wives left, if (there) was/is not for them (F) a child, so if (there) was/is for them a child, so for you (P) the 1/4 from what they (F) left from after a bequest/will they (F) bequeath/direct with it or a debtWIVES
...and for them (F) the 1/4 from what you (P) left, if (there) was not for you (P) a child, so
if (there) was for you (P) a child, so for them (F) the 1/8 from what you (P) left from after a bequest/will you (P) bequeath/direct with it or a debt...and if (he) was/is a man to be inherited kalalatan (without child) or a woman (wife), and for him (is) a brother, or a sister, so for each one from them (B) the 1/6
Note above sequence; CHILDREN, PARENTS, SPOUSES, and finally how to deal with a deceased who is childless and spouseless (which we are all born kalalat) allowing brothers and sisters to partake (replacing children) if NO child or spouse.
IF 1f or 1m = 1/6 of total inheritance
Case 1 brother; mother; father
1 ? 1/6 mother ? 1/6 brother = 2/3 fatherCase 1 sister; mother; father
1 ? 1/3 mother ? 1/6 sister = 1/2 father??...so if they were more than that, so they are partners in the 1/3, from after a bequest/will is bequeathed/directed with it or a debt not harming, (a) direction/command from God, and God (is) knowledgeable clement.
IF 1f and/or 1m > 1 = 1/3 of total inheritance
Case brother/s and sister/s; father
1 ? 1/3 (brother/s and sister/s; see 4176 for distribution ratio) = 2/3 fatherCase 2+ brothers; mother; father
1 ? 1/6 mother ? 1/3 brothers = 1/2 fatherCase 2+ sisters; mother; father
1 ? 1/3 mother ? 1/3 sisters = 1/3 father
Quran 4176 Distribution ratios for brothers and sisters
They ask your opinion/clarification , say "God decrees/decides in alkalalati, if (a) man/human died, not for him (without) a child, and for him (is) a sister, so for her half (of) what he left, and he inherits her if (there) was not for her a child??
Another common misconception is with ?...and he inherits her? which means she gets 1/2 and he gets 1/2 of the brother/sister pie NOT the WHOLE inheritance which there may be parents who need to be given their shares first.
IF 1f or f = m ratio of distribution = 11
1f; 1 ? nth m
2f; 2m
3f; 3mCase 1 sister; 1 brother
1/2 sister + 1/2 brother = 1Case 1 sibling ratio 10 or 01 and since no other heirs then he/she gets entire inheritance.
??and if they (B) were two (F), so to them (B/F) the 2/3 from what he left??
IF 2f or 2f = m ratio of distribution = 21
2f; 1 ? nth m
4f; 2m
8f; 4mCase 2 sisters and 1 brother
Sisters get 2/3 and brother gets 1/3 at ratio = 21?? and if they were brothers (siblings) men and women, so to the male equal/alike (th) share e(of) the two females,
Ratio of distribution = 12 female/male
The above is the general case with the exceptions mentioned; below is ratio distribution depending on mix...
1m 2m 3m 4m
1f 11 11 11 11
2f 21 11 21 21
3f 12 12 11 12
4f 12 21 12 11
NOTE above ratios of distribution for one female to one male, not one to many or many to one.
Examples distributing $100 to children/siblings pie after all others are paid off...
Case 1f; 1m ? + ? = 1 50 + 50 = 100
Case 2f; 1m 1/3 + 1/3 + 1/3 = 1 33.3 + 33.3 + 33.3 = 100
Case 3f; 1m 1/5 + 1/5 + 1/5 + 2/5 20 + 20 + 20 + 40 = 100
Case 4f; 1m 1/6 + 1/6 + 1/6 + 1/6 + 1/3 = 1 16.7 + 16.7 + 16.7 + 16.7 + 33.3 = 100Case 1f; 2m 1/3 + 1/3 + 1/3 = 1
Case 1f; 3m ? + ? + ? + ? = 1
Case 1f; 4m 1/5 + 1/5 + 1/5 + 1/5 = 1Case 2f; 2m ? + ? = 1
Case 2f; 3m 2/7 + 2/7 + 1/7 + 1/7 + 1/7 = 1
Case 2f; 4m ? + ? + 1/8 + 1/8 + 1/8 + 1/8 = 1God clarifies for you that (E) you (not) be misguided, and God is with every thing knowledgeable.
Peace
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Peace all,
A lot seems to be going on here and I cannot quite follow it) So I need to ask for clarification. Nun you say,
"Quran 411 ??to the male?? relationship to number of females implied in context to all three cases."
Do you mean that when Quran talks about 2/3 for daughters when they are more than two, this is in relation to the inheritance of sons as opposed to a fixed share from the whole? I ask this because Quran says "falahunnathulutha ma taraka" 2/3 what he/she has left ("he/she" obviously refers to the deceased )
Onur
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Do you mean that when Quran talks about 2/3 for daughters when they are more than two, this is in relation to the inheritance of sons as opposed to a fixed share from the whole?
Yes, exactly! Although not sure if fawqa two means more than two, else distribution for daughters/sons changes slightly.
Talks about portion what he/she left for THE CHILDREN and how to distribute accordingly depending on female/male mix.
411 God directs you in your children, to the male equal (the) fortune (share of) the two females, so if they are/were women fawqa two, so for them (F) two thirds (from) what he left, and if she was one, so for her the half
Reading through in context it is still in relation ?...to the male...?
Similarly 4176 says how to distribute brothers/sisters portion depending on their mix...
Basically distribute to parents and spouse if they exist then remaining amount to children depending on their mix else if no children or spouse (kalalatan) brothers and sisters partake as would children with similar ratios.
Case mother, father, 2 daughters, 2 sons
411 and to his parents, to each one from them (B) the sixth from what he left, if for him was a child
1 ? 1/3 parents (1/6 mother + 1/6 father) = 2/3 children
2 daughters and 2 sons is same mix as 1 daughter and 1 son
411 ?...and if she was one, so for her the half
2 daughters get ? of 2/3 children?s total share and likewise the sons gets other ? of 2/3.
Thus all 4 children get an equal share of the remainder (after parents are paid) or ratio 11 female/male...
1m 2m 3m 4m
1f 11 11 11 11
2f 21 11 21 21
3f 12 12 11 12
4f 12 21 12 11
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I would be pleased to accept this interpretation but it seems to go against grammar
How can "2/3 what he/she left" mean the same thing as "2/3 of the son's share".
Note the expression "2/3 what he/she left." The verb is "to leave" and he/she refers to the deceased person, person who leaves behind money when he dies. The grammar seems to suggest that daughters get 2/3 from what the deceased person/their father leaves behind. -
The verb is "to leave" and he/she refers to the deceased person, person who leaves behind money when he dies. The grammar seems to suggest that daughters get 2/3 from what the deceased person/their father leaves behind.
Right, daughters (in this case) get 2/3 what the deceased person/their father left behind for the children.
411 God directs you in your children,...
To state/apply a fixed amount to a variable (i.e. number of children/siblings and their gender mix) never works and will be mathematically/logically flawed with contradiction.
1 ? 2/3 daughters ? 1/3 parents = 1 which leaves nothing to a wife and sons.
One has to ask/calculate WHAT exactly did he leave behind for the children?
If mother 1 ? 1/6 = 5/6 children?s share
If mother, father 1 ? 1/3 = 2/3 children?s share
If wife, father 1 - 1/8 - 1/6 = 17/24 children's share
If wife, mother, father 1 ? 1/8 ? 1/3 = 13/24 children?s shareLikewise, brothers and sisters are variables dependent on mix and inheritors present.
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Salaam all
Yes, quite a long has gone fast! I would like to comment on two points by Nun
...fa-in kunna nisaan fawqa ithnatayni falahunna thulutha ma taraka
411 ...so if they are women over two, so for them (F) two thirds what he left,waladun fa-in kanata ithnatayni ani mimma taraka
4176 ...and if they (B) were two (F), so to them (B/F) the two thirds from what he leftOver/encompassing can also mean like saying a kid is over 2 years old yet not 3; more/greater than use a different word...
This is the first point. One cannot give example of age in this case. You can say the boy is two and a half years old, but you cannot say the deceeased left two and a half girls. Over two is not two or more.
The second point is your differentiating between "kilalatan" and "alkilala", which is really bizarre! No difference whatsoever between the two. It's as if you are saying "being a boy is for a male up to the age of ten and the boy is the male between 11 and 16"; because "kilalatan" in the verse means (a man/woman being kilalatan), and the explanation of kilala is given in verse 4176.
And a question What do you mean by
I believe there might be a slight discrepancy with ratios for brothers and sisters which should be same as with daughters and sons
Why should they be the same? Are children and siblings the same? That's why they are in different verses.
I haven't gone through formulae. If we understand the principles, formulae will be OK (if we ar good in math ;D), otherwise leave the calculations to the expert, and this is what I will be doing
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Hello again Samia,
This is the first point. One cannot give example of age in this case. You can say the boy is two and a half years old, but you cannot say the deceeased left two and a half girls. Over two is not two or more.
If it means over two (i.e. 3+) then we use these ratios to divide shares amongst children.
1m 2m 3m
1f 11 11 11
2f 12 11 12
3f 21 21 11
The second point is your differentiating between "kilalatan" and "alkilala", which is really bizarre! No difference whatsoever between the two.
That's exactly what my earlier conclusion was except differ with traditionalists that the person has to be fatherless ...
Below is my new understanding which "kalalatan" 412 and ?alkalalati? 4176 are same (i.e. childless/spouseless) as stated in Qur'an and they can have a father, mother, and/or siblings.
And a question What do you mean by
Why should they be the same? Are children and siblings the same? That's why they are in different verses.Makes sense although have to look into it -- see attached pdf with different ratios for children and siblings.
Peace
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My most heartfelt contragulations to the writers of this threda. I am impressed and moved by the staying power and dedication. When I started to read de messages to me it was like reading Marsian. It continues the same, but at times I have the funny sensation that I may understand one of two words of Marsian, but I am not sure. So I will ask just one question
1m 2m 3m
1f 11 11 11
2f 12 11 12
3f 21 21 11
In this table
first line, first row, 11 means 1 male gets as much as one female,
first line second row 11 two males get as much as one female
First line 3rd row 11 three males get as much as one female
Second line 1st row 12 means one male gets as much as two females
2nd row 11 means two males get as much as two females
3rd row 12 means three males get as much as two females
Third line 1st row 21 means three females gets twice as much as 1 male
2nd row 21 means three females get twice as much as two males
3rd row 11 means that three females get as much as three males
Is that it?
please confirm or correct my faulty understanding.
I Had given up getting any insight into these questions of inheritance in the Quran, so I am thrilled about those two words or Marsian that I may understand now and thank you again for your sustained input. May the Inheritor bless you.
Salaam
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Salaam Nun
Sorry I did not see your earlier understanding of (kilalatan/alkilala) and am glad you are sticking to this.
The attachment corrects this error and what resulted of it.Salaam huruf
If you understand this table correctly (which you do bravo), then welcome to the planet Mars! This table is as far as I can go with issuing formulae (I understand them though).
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My most heartfelt contragulations to the writers of this threda. I am impressed and moved by the staying power and dedication. When I started to read de messages to me it was like reading Marsian. It continues the same, but at times I have the funny sensation that I may understand one of two words of Marsian, but I am not sure. So I will ask just one question
In this tablefirst line, first row, 11 means 1 male gets as much as one female,
first line second row 11 two males get as much as one female
First line 3rd row 11 three males get as much as one female
Second line 1st row 12 means one male gets as much as two females
2nd row 11 means two males get as much as two females
3rd row 12 means three males get as much as two females
Third line 1st row 21 means three females gets twice as much as 1 male
2nd row 21 means three females get twice as much as two males
3rd row 11 means that three females get as much as three males
Is that it?
Yes, that is correct.
It?s a relationship males to a number of females; see attached pdf with diagram to help visualize.
Case 1 daughter and 1 son
411 ??and if she was one, so for her the half?? which leaves ? ?to the male? 11 ratioNotice God seems to favor the only daughter with many brothers and vice versa?
Case 1 daughter; 10 sons ($100,000 inheritance)
411 ??and if she was one, so for her the half?? which leaves ? to the 10 males.She gets $50,000 while 10 sons each get $5,000 or remaining ?
Case 10 daughters; 1 son ($100,000 inheritance)
411 ??so if they are/were women over two, so for them (F) two thirds??10 daughters get 2/3 or $6,666 each while the son gets remaining 1/3 or $33,333
Peace
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Nun, Your case with 10 sons and 1 daughter strikes me as a very unjust distribution. What is so special about the daughter that she gets 50000 while sons are content with 5000 each? ) Do not forget that Quran gives the males responsibility to spend for the family in the verse 434. The sons could use some of their sister's 50000 for that purpose )
I understand the first part of 411 to mean "To the male two times the share of the female. If female(meaning that there is no male child involved), then if they are more than two they get 2/3 of what the deceased has left and if she is one she gets half" In other words, in all mixed cases involving sons and daughters together, 1 male=2 female formula should be applied. This is both gramatically sound and also in accordance with 434. 2/3 and 1/2 are applied to the daughters in cases when there is no male child.
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Nun, Your case with 10 sons and 1 daughter strikes me as a very unjust distribution. What is so special about the daughter that she gets 50000 while sons are content with 5000 each? Do not forget that Quran gives the males responsibility to spend for the family in the verse 434. The sons could use some of their sister's 50000 for that purpose
Unjust is a matter of perspective. What about 10 daughters get $6,666 each while one son gets $33,333; is that fair?
Think earning power 434 ?The men (are) taking care of matters for livelihood??
10 males working need less to support one female whereas one male will need more to support 10 females.
God knows best.
I understand the first part of 411 to mean "To the male two times the share of the female. If female(meaning that there is no male child involved), then if they are more than two they get 2/3 of what the deceased has left and if she is one she gets half" In other words, in all mixed cases involving sons and daughters together, 1 male=2 female formula should be applied. This is both gramatically sound and also in accordance with 434. 2/3 and 1/2 are applied to the daughters in cases when there is no male child.
That was my prior understanding; 2/3 and ? only applicable if no males else contradicts.
Case 3 daughters and 3 sons
2/3 daughters + 2 * 2/3 twice as much for sons = 6/3 or twice the inheritance.Likewise, with the initial case presented in this thread 3 daughters; mother; father; wife
2/3 daughters + 1/3 (1/6 mother + 1/6 father) + 1/8 wife = 1 + 1/8 which is too much.No way to solve above without applying algebra and reducing everyone?s stated shares.
Whereas in the method outlined we simply calculate the children?s share?
1 - 1/3 (1/6 mother + 1/6 father) - 1/8 wife = 13/24 children?s share
With no sons 3 daughters get entire amount of children's share ratio 10 -- common sense and simple.
Peace
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Unjust is a matter of perspective. What about 10 daughters get $6,666 each while one son gets $33,333; is that fair?
Think earning power 434 ?The men (are) taking care of matters for livelihood??
10 males working need less to support one female whereas one male will need more to support 10 females.
God knows best.
Yes, it makes sense. If you are two sisters and inherit each half what an only brother inherit, in a sense you can share many things between two and the brother has all the charges for him whichever they are. By the same token, two brothers and one sister works the other way. For the two of them whatever burden she may be they can share and, but thatever burden they may be for her she is stuck with them. So better be well endowed.
At any rate, bearing in mind that there is always the possiblite to endowe by will, it seems sensible and fari to spread as much the burdens and the advantages, so that not too much weight falls on anybody, in case someone dies without making provision for his or her succession.
Again I congratulate all participants in this thread. I would never have thought that I would end up taking interest in this part. And I can say that I feel rewarded, even before inheriting yay yay yay
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With 10 daughters and 1 son, according to the 1 male=2 female formula if the money is 100000 each daughter gets 8333 and son gets 16666. This is definitely more reasonable than daughter getting 50000 and each son getting 5000(She gets 45000 more than her siblings just because she is a girl).
If you consider the rationale of 1 male=2 female in the first part of the verse and take into account the responsibility(not privelege) given to sons to financially manage the household, I think you would agree on the absurdity of giving the daughter 50000 and each son only 5000 in this hypothetical case.
Plus, the whole grammar of that verse suggests 2/3 and 1/2 as 1) shares from the whole inheritance that deceased has left behind and 2) shares that should be applied when there are only female children(notice the condition, "if children are female and over two then 2/3 and if one then 1/2".
I agree that this interpretation would remove some difficulties but I find it very streched it does not fit the grammar and it leads to its own absurdities. Let us go back to our good old algebra.
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Salaam Onur, all
With 10 daughters and 1 son, according to the 1 male=2 female formula if the money is 100000 each daughter gets 8333 and son gets 16666. This is definitely more reasonable than daughter getting 50000 and each son getting 5000(She gets 45000 more than her siblings just because she is a girl).
We can also say what if a brother is an irresponsible person, a criminal, and the girl is a divorced/widowed mother with ten children? Inheritance law is not meant to address each individual case.We have above this law the commandment to write a will to address special cases. Just because Muslims neutralized the will and abrogated it by a hadith does not stop it from being an obligation.
If you consider the rationale of 1 male=2 female in the first part of the verse and take into account the responsibility(not privelege) given to sons to financially manage the household, I think you would agree on the absurdity of giving the daughter 50000 and each son only 5000 in this hypothetical case.
God did not bestow the responsibility on a "gender", but on the able to work, gain and spend. Families supported by women are as common as families supported by men.
Plus, the whole grammar of that verse suggests 2/3 and 1/2 as 1) shares from the whole inheritance that deceased has left behind and 2) shares that should be applied when there are only female children(notice the condition, "if children are female and over two then 2/3 and if one then 1/2".
That's not correct. The verse says "and if they were women above/more than two", where the "they were" is feminine ( ) and cannot refer to mixed children (generic masculine) but to the female part of the children.
it does not fit the grammar
It fits grammar, language and logic (i.e calculations). Please give examples of any grammatical/linguistic error.