This is a really wonderful essay, and epitomizes why I am drawn to Islam. I agree that people who truly strive to surrender to God's will come in all different sorts of labels. I do my best in life to tune myself into the will of God, so in the most literal and strictest sense of the word, perhaps I can be called a Muslim. The reason I don't necessarily use that label is because I think that labels (particularly in these troubled times) divide, and because I believe that Allah is universal, I feel that my path is best left unlabeled.
I really like the section about the hypocrites. Some truly awful people tend to populate the higher ranks of various religions, and using God's name (in whatever context) as a means to dominate the lives of other people is sickening. I think Islam is appealing, because in my overstanding, it is ultimately about an individual's relationship with God. In its best manifestation, it seems like Islam could provide the world with a means to truly interact with each other in a truly egalitarian manner (God willing!).
There are definitely parts of the Koran that I find difficult to digest. However, I realize that since I have no knowledge of Arabic, I am not reading the true Koran. I think that at our core, a book is not needed to live the best life that an individual is capable of living. If we acknowledge God's existence, and strive to surrender to God's cosmic order, then the life we are hardwired to live will manifest itself in our daily lives.