peace Mazhar,
The problem with your interpretation is your own insertions, and that you seem to regard the common Arabic word "muslim" as a proper title/name, when this is not the case. This has been discussed at length in this forum.
See http//misconceptions-about-islam.com/muslim-or-hell.htm
Although, having said that, technically one should be muslim (small "m" to gain "paradise".
Peace Wakas,
There is no insertion in 1502. What is in parentheses can also be put outside in the striaght translation. What is stated therein is the desire which will be stated and repeated quite often only in the Hereafter. The other word in Parentheses is Grand Qur'aan which is mentioned immediately before this Ayah, which is denied by people about whom the information is given in this Ayah.
However I am happay about a little tilt "Although.......".